Winning Critiques

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Congrats to Melissa!

Melissa is this month's lucky query critique winner! This is her original pitch: And here is my critique: This sounds like such a cool...

Congrats to Faerl!

The first WFH query critique winner is Faerl—thanks for entering! Here is her original query: And here is my critique: I'm a big fan of...

Congrats to Deborah!

Deborah is the winner of 2020's first query critique—yay for her! This is her original query: And here is my critique: I'm a big fan of...

Congrats to Andrea!

This month's lucky query critique winner is Andrea — yay for you! Here is her original pitch letter: And here is my critique: Domestic...

Congrats to Abigail!

This month's lucky winner is Abigail—congratulations! Her original query is posted below: And here is my critique: Posting this critique...

Congrats to Kate!

This month's query critique winner is Kate! Congrats, Kate! Here is her original query letter: And here her query letter with my...

Congrats to KayLynn!

This month's query critique winner is KayLynn. Congratulations! Here is her original query: And here is my critique: I love the premise...

Congrats to Lea!

Lea is the winner of March query critique contest! Here is her original query: And here is my critique: This query has an intriguing...

Congrats to L'Oreal!

This month's lucky #8 is L'Oreal...congrats!! Here is her original query: And here is my critique: I'm excited that we have a nonfiction...